This is a movie that I and a co-writer made. Me and him have since had a falling out and I will be making a new version of the film soon. He said he will allow me to use his writing for a manageable sum after I reasoned with him. But first I want feedback on this version. What is your overall impression of it? And what are your favorite scenes and your least favorite scenes? So that I have a good idea of what I should include in my new version. You may leave feedback either here or in the comments on the video.

The Wogglebug and Sylvie and the Enchanted Forest


I make my dreams into movies.

I'm trying to be kind here (really I am) but you would have to pay me BIG bucks to watch 2 1/2 hours of something for which I'm not the target audience.

I suspect you'll be far better off asking your friends and family for feedback (in the industry we also pay folks to do this, or at the very least offer them craft services).

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Mike "ex-genius" Kelley

I would say Mike said all i would say...
I scrubbed a bit through the film and nothing really attracted my interest.
Most scenes looked quite similar and first of all i strongly suggest to reduce your film in a reasonable length...


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