good work here , congrats


     

Thank you for your comments. I don’t like doing dialogue because its really hard and people could get bored watching. The movie will be about 45 min long and without this part it would be hard to
Understand the character and his motivation.
But I value all comments, thank you for watching

Very special video. The long dialogues made me want to quit, though.
I liked the memorial overlay. Was hoping for more of them.
Sorry, just my thoughts. It is very well done, pretty persuasive.
But a bit difficult to watch, especially if english is not your native language.

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I seem to have missed this one...
Very nice! And great work with the voices...


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Hey Pete,
Thank you..I was trying to make a character with a voice similar to clint Easywood’s bur knowing that later I may make some flashbacks where Gordon is younger. Next time Ill try Woody and see if I get Clint.. lol

Excellent. I really liked it. Gordon sounded like Woody Harrelson. 🙂

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Vlado,
Thx, cool you liked it

Hy predosura, good work, and lyp sin. I love the PBR Colors.

Hey Kipster,
Thank you for the feedback.. how would you improve it? This will show me what you mean much better.?

Thank u HowardV
I am really glad that you liked it, I was concerned about having a 10 minute scene with dialogue without people tuning out. I am almost relived that you said you were sucked in.
Also, I am not a a professional writer or actor, so its great that you liked it. I did the voices for this episode but for future episodes I will bring others onboard.

I have completed 45 minutes of the movie so far and I have about 5 more minutes to go. I have about 50% of the sound effects and about 30 % of the music.

But guess what, if people cant watch the first 10
minutes they won’t watch the next 10... so I am very happy u said that..
Thank you for the feedback..