Hi Toy Story,

imho the shooting needs to be faster not just a tick tock way about it if you get me and more of a rapid movement, I love when the gun hits happen, I reckon the vehicles need to be faster also picking up and dropping in speed as they interact with each other.

Maybe get closer camera shots of wheels and so on. When the high camera shot starts to drop I would start to bring it in to a windscreen shot showing the driver and also flash hits in the rear of the view, then camera move right/left and along the trucks under carriage to then show the number plate of the truck thats firing, then up and close in, just ideas that might work.

I think that its very good, well done