The beginning felt a little long winded which reminded me of the old Bible Movies but served it`s purpose.
Characters came in to view and camera work good and there is foot slippage which isn`t a big thing and can be sorted out. It would be nice for the camera to be closer in places, there are a lot of long shots and the feeling as if we the audience are high up, lower the camera to view as a stage event but don`t go doing loads of zoom either, it needs a good balance.
Those puffed up dresses animate really well. You could try to have your static characters heads set to watch the active dancers.
Overall even though this isn`t my kind of thing I can appreciate the work gone in to it and it looks good, well done. :)
Dean
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