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Sage Path - EP#1

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Yeah so I manage to create an animation wohoo! Here I would like to share it with all you lovely people. Natively rendered it in iClone 8. Forgive me for the amateur animation. I'm a newbie :D Would love to hear your comments and thoughts about it. 


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Awesome job really enjoyed this looking forward to the next episode.
Congrats on your project.


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Appreciate your comment :)
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Very Nice, Well done
Greetings Robert
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Solid first effort.

Timing of the key framed animations is often pretty awkward. You can sell some of that with camerawork , editing and audio to cover up the blemishes.

While computer voices are easy to use I have a really hard time watching a longer video with so much robotic dialog. Real voices would have been a big improvement.

Sets, characters/costumes, lighting and renders look very good. It’s great to see an ambitious story being told. Looking forward to your future works.



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thebiz.movies (4/12/2023)
Solid first effort.

Timing of the key framed animations is often pretty awkward. You can sell some of that with camerawork , editing and audio to cover up the blemishes.

While computer voices are easy to use I have a really hard time watching a longer video with so much robotic dialog. Real voices would have been a big improvement.

Sets, characters/costumes, lighting and renders look very good. It’s great to see an ambitious story being told. Looking forward to your future works.


Yeap, i must confess the key framed animations are pretty awkward since i kinda rush it. And forgive me for the computer voices since my places of work are in coffee shops mostly on a laptop. I would love to render my scenes in Unreal or omniverse in the future but currently am on a limited resource for my laptop. But truth be told, my main objective is really to deliver the core of my main story. I just figured about a few months ago that animating in iclone is pretty much my forte compare to scriptwriting.

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Good story and animation but ruined by abysmal acting from some sort of AI voice. I'd suggest finding your local amateur theatre group and giving them a few beers in exchange for some voice recording. Even a bad actor would lift what was an otherwise great effort.

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jeffkirkland (4/13/2023)
Good story and animation but ruined by abysmal acting from some sort of AI voice. I'd suggest finding your local amateur theatre group and giving them a few beers in exchange for some voice recording. Even a bad actor would lift what was an otherwise great effort.


Thanks for the feedback Jeff. Appreciate the comment. I totally agree with you in regards to using real people voice recording. Ill double the effort.





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