Yeah so I manage to create an animation wohoo! Here I would like to share it with all you lovely people. Natively rendered it in iClone 8. Forgive me for the amateur animation. I'm a newbie Would love to hear your comments and thoughts about it. 

Awesome job really enjoyed this looking forward to the next episode.
Congrats on your project.


Warped Reality VFX.

Appreciate your comment

Very Nice, Well done
Greetings Robert

Solid first effort.

Timing of the key framed animations is often pretty awkward. You can sell some of that with camerawork , editing and audio to cover up the blemishes.

While computer voices are easy to use I have a really hard time watching a longer video with so much robotic dialog. Real voices would have been a big improvement.

Sets, characters/costumes, lighting and renders look very good. It’s great to see an ambitious story being told. Looking forward to your future works.

Yeap, i must confess the key framed animations are pretty awkward since i kinda rush it. And forgive me for the computer voices since my places of work are in coffee shops mostly on a laptop. I would love to render my scenes in Unreal or omniverse in the future but currently am on a limited resource for my laptop. But truth be told, my main objective is really to deliver the core of my main story. I just figured about a few months ago that animating in iclone is pretty much my forte compare to scriptwriting.

Good story and animation but ruined by abysmal acting from some sort of AI voice. I'd suggest finding your local amateur theatre group and giving them a few beers in exchange for some voice recording. Even a bad actor would lift what was an otherwise great effort.

Jeff Kirkland | Director • Cinematographer • Storyteller
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Thanks for the feedback Jeff. Appreciate the comment. I totally agree with you in regards to using real people voice recording. Ill double the effort.