First Pharaohs


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By MarBar Studios - 6 Years Ago
                                                                               

I have been tossing this story around in my head for years.  Technology is truly AMAZING!  It may be a bit long for some of you to sit through, and I understand that.  I am proud of my accomplishment as it shows that I can complete a project once I set my mind to it and clear out doubts and distractions.  I'm still learning, and know that there is much that still needs to be improved upon.  I'm thinking of trying to make this into a series, as now I have the framework to create the entire tale.  Reallusion, Thank you for creating iClone for a hobbyist such as myself.  I have found hours of endless joy on this journey.  To my fellow hobbyists, I say, Never stop perfecting your skills.  This was so much fun to create!

MarBar Studios

By justaviking - 6 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing.  Smile

It was an interesting story, and I'm glad you were able to have fun creating it.  I detected some "Stargate" inspiration, and that's cool.  I'd like to encourage you to use live actors for the voices next time, even if they are friends and family amateurs.  The computer-generated text-to-speech gets a bit old after a while, especially when it is used for all the characters.  Don't worry about it, though, it's just a suggestion for next time.

Keep on having fun, and be sure to let us know when you have another movie to share.
By diomkal - 6 Years Ago
Not Bad! 
By MarBar Studios - 6 Years Ago
Thank you for the feedback.  I do agree the voices need to be real people.  I do have to recruit people in the future.
By MarBar Studios - 6 Years Ago
Any critiques for improvement or storytelling are welcome!  Thanks for viewing.
By MarBar Studios - 6 Years Ago
I want to thank all of you who have viewed first Pharaohs.  We have submitted the final results to two streaming portals.  The first is Dust, and the second is itsashort.  We are hoping to be allowed access on both these sites.  we are also looking at SeedandSpark for possible crowdfunding and screening.

Thank you All,

Marco Barnes Jr
Marbar Studios