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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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 My NEW Short film " Cognitive Dis"... Released Jul 2015 ... I composed the entire musical orchestration for this film... Peaches( aka Zola)
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By planetstardragon - 9 Years Ago
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you have the spirit of a true artist, stunning work! 
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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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planetstardragon (7/26/2015)
you have the spirit of a true artist, stunning work!
Wow thank you planetstardragon I'm so glad you liked it!! ... Thank you for taking the time to watch it and give feedback! 
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By VirtualMedia - 9 Years Ago
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Great story line, and lighting effects were well done. Also liked how the dripping water was created and used to evoke thought.
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By Peter Blood - 9 Years Ago
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A thought provoking story. Nicely done. I also liked your use of the dripping faucet.
pete
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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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VirtualMedia (7/26/2015)
Great story line, and lighting effects were well done. Also liked how the dripping water was created and used to evoke thought.
Thank you VirtualMedia! ... As I am a singer/musician by trade w no film background, your comments about my storyline, lighting are words I could only dream of hearing! So glad you got the dripping water thing!
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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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peterblood (7/26/2015)
A thought provoking story. Nicely done. I also liked your use of the dripping faucet. pete
 One of the dreams I had when I bought Iclone was to make films that would evoke emotions and thought so thank you ... I liked the look of the dripping water faucet, but after a while started to wonder if anyone would really get it, so it's Awesome that you too got the dripping water thanks peterblood!
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By dwacon - 9 Years Ago
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WOW! That was awesome work! Loved it!
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By justaviking - 9 Years Ago
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I totally agree with what the others have already said. Wonderful work.
I also enjoyed and appreciated the interaction with props (turning pages, playing piano, etc.). You had nice camera work, too, and I enjoyed the interesting and appropriate transition between scenes around the 2:05-2:10 mark,.
I must point out the great facial expression when the janitor spies the Red Book and his eyebrows lift up You really conveyed that very effectively.
Oh, and the music too! I loved the dramatic build around 3:45. It got my pulse going!
Thanks for sharing.
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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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dwacon (8/10/2015)
WOW! That was awesome work! Loved it!
Thanks alot dwacon and congrats on your new film! I will definitely check out your future web home!
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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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justaviking (8/11/2015)
I totally agree with what the others have already said. Wonderful work. I also enjoyed and appreciated the interaction with props (turning pages, playing piano, etc.). You had nice camera work, too, and I enjoyed the interesting and appropriate transition between scenes around the 2:05-2:10 mark,. I must point out the great facial expression when the janitor spies the Red Book and his eyebrows lift up You really conveyed that very effectively. Oh, and the music too! I loved the dramatic build around 3:45. It got my pulse going! Thanks for sharing.
I can't tell you how much your comments meant to me! Thank you so much for sharing those specific things with me. I spent so much time on each of those things so it was an awesome feeling to read your comment! So glad you enjoyed it ... Peaches
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By son.m - 9 Years Ago
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I like the symbolism/metaphors you used (e.g. the universe with galaxies). The piano part is also nice.
The end was good, also because the first guy left the book in the trash (I would have found it illogical when he suddenly changed his mind/life just because of a random book he found so it was understandable that he was too scared for taking it with him).
The way you told your story reminded me a bit of old Chaplin movies, which I really like. It's cool to tell a story without dialogues
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By afterThought - 9 Years Ago
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Really enjoyed this short, Peaches! A unique way of getting a concept across without even a single word of dialogue. And to be able to drive the story with your own music - it's impressive! Well done!
aT
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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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son.m (8/16/2015)
I like the symbolism/metaphors you used (e.g. the universe with galaxies). The piano part is also nice. The end was good, also because the first guy left the book in the trash (I would have found it illogical when he suddenly changed his mind/life just because of a random book he found so it was understandable that he was too scared for taking it with him). The way you told your story reminded me a bit of old Chaplin movies, which I really like. It's cool to tell a story without dialogues
Thanks alot son.m! I'm so pleased you got my symbolism/metaphors and space references and liked my piano & ending.  .. I followed my gut, my vision, tried to do the best I could on all levels, and then crossed my fingers and just prayed the film would make sense, so thanks a million for sharing this with me and also the Charlie Chaplin reference is soo cool!!
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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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afterThought (8/16/2015)
Really enjoyed this short, Peaches! A unique way of getting a concept across without even a single word of dialogue. And to be able to drive the story with your own music - it's impressive! Well done! aT
Many, many thanks afterThought that's awesome that you enjoyed it!! ... I just so did not want the film to drag and be boring without dialogue, or for my music to be distracting or overwhelming, so I love the phrase you used "drive the story with my music"... Thank you so much!
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By Rampa - 9 Years Ago
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It can be so difficult to break out of "familiarity". And then we have our natural resilience that makes us put up with what we shouldn't over time. Bad things become more beareable, or considered normal. Then something worse comes along and lather, rinse, repeat!
I thought you illustrated the idea very nicely. I really liked the piano suggesting sadness and hope (well, for me anyway), and also the poignancy of the older fellow feeling "it just wasn't worth it" while the young woman was ready to take it on.
Looking forward to your next piece.
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By Peaches Chrenko - 9 Years Ago
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rampa (8/16/2015)
It can be so difficult to break out of "familiarity". And then we have our natural resilience that makes us put up with what we shouldn't over time. Bad things become more beareable, or considered normal. Then something worse comes along and lather, rinse, repeat! I thought you illustrated the idea very nicely. I really liked the piano suggesting sadness and hope (well, for me anyway), and also the poignancy of the older fellow feeling "it just wasn't worth it" while the young woman was ready to take it on. Looking forward to your next piece.
That's so true Rampa, well said ... All of your words are so very meaningful to me regarding this film because I am very passionate about this subject, so Thank You very much for That! ... The piano part was very important to me because I wanted it to suggest both sadness and hope so I'm glad that came across! I'm very grateful that you took the time to share with me. Thanks again!
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