I enjoyed the animation and wanted to see the resolution of why Grandma couldn't see the shapes, but I couldn't understand what Grandpa said about what they had in common (besides a vivid imagination). The voices (especially Grandpa) seemed to have a lot of boominess/reverb that cut down on the clarity of the speech. Otherwise very good.
Thank you very much for the feedback!
I figured most people would relate to the situation; not everyone sees what you see when gazing at clouds (or the stars). However, some people have pareidolia; a tendency to interpret patterns, formations (i.e. clouds) as something familiar. 'Pareidolia' is the word the Grandpa used at the end. Perhaps that could have been said/enunciated slower, or as suggested the dialogue audio reverb/EQ could have been slightly flatter. But since its not a common word, you may have still wondered what was said.
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