Looks very interesting wungun ! ....
The only thing that 'confused' me slightly was when the guard was at the console and Smith was in the background (~ :49 secs). On first viewing, I got the impression that Smith was *speaking* when he wasn't - it was the guard. Why? - Because of some 'shimmering' coming from Smith's lips - maybe his 'teeth' or 'light leak' - not sure. This confusion disappeared after an extra viewing (once I fully understood who was speaking and when). This wouldn't be an issue if seeing the whole movie in context.
Anyway, just thought I'd mention it from a "first impression" point of view - in case it helps!

You do very well to Write, Animate and Direct! - I loved the droid ...

So what's the anticipated 'running time'?
Also ... where did the model of 'Smith' come from?
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