Since publishing my first movie I have had some really useful constructive criticism and this will definitely help me in the future.

Ideally, of course, I would have asked for some sort of review before I officially released it.

Therefore I was wondering if there are any of the more experienced film makers who would be willing to review and provide criticism on films before they were made public.

I don't know if anybody would want to publicly declare their willingness (as they might be deluged) but if there was anyone willing to do this for me could they send me a private message. I am slow and it took me over 6 months to make the last one so you would not have to do it very often! 

Thank you

Mick/Toonarama

I'll give it a go. I'm new to animation but I've been working in the industry for some 15 years.

I've sent you a PM.

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I think submitting your own cut on the forum is a good idea. The suggestions from people not only help you but also help others to learn from your experiment.

That's community / group learning.

Why deprive us ?

Thank you very much for your offers of help - they are much appreciated