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DEATH BY JELLY - A COMIC BOOK HORROR FOR HALLOWEEN

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Just in time for Halloween I present my first ever Iclone animation. I would love to have your comments. Unfortunately it maybe a bit too dark in some places for some monitors; I keep forgetting my monitor is pretty bright.

 

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WOW! For your first Iclone movie it is very well done! Voices characters are convaincing!!
For visual part , I didn't see shadows on everything and remember you've unlimited camera ! :-)

Congratulations!!
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Unfortunately it maybe a bit too dark in some places for some monitors; I keep forgetting my monitor is pretty bright.


For me the bright factor is perfect.
General the light and camera is outstanding good.
Great clip w00t

Robert

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For a first clip that was awesome. Good story. The dialog going with the animation frozen on screen was a bit awkward for me. Great job overall and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.




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Thanks for the support and comments - it is good to know what people didn't like as well as did like because this will/should help me not make the same mistakes again.

Thank you to all those who have taken the time to view and/or comment

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Great movie toonarama.

Normally iClone movies over 3 mins and I get distracted easily, but the story and atmospheric graphics kept me glued to the monitor to the end.

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE OF THESE.

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I really like the facial expression of the mad scientist! Cool character design too.
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Pretty amazing for a first film! WOW!!!!
And super awesome voice-work from your actorsBigGrinBigGrin

Keep 'em coming!!!!!TongueTongueTongue

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Absolutely awesome!! Loved it and perfect for today, Halloween. The voice actors were fantastic and the story easy to watch. Smile

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toonarama, that was a great first production with compelling visuals.

EDIT: I should at least get the name right...Blush

My only comment is the timing of the gestures during dialog, which looked a bit off to me. I've run into that myself with the iClone animation clips and what I do is cut them up (using Break) and rearrange them to fit the speech. It's a bit of work but it makes a big difference.

I was interested to see that you used fiverr for voice actors. How that you approach them, and how did it work out?


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